Beneath the running scars of life.
Vulnerable loveless sighs.
Out of solitude
Love will still survive.
Oozing hearts with pain
Sand dunes and desert.
In those little eyes. I see
Love will still survive.
Tangled mind ..Cripple soul.
You did no wrong
You did no right.. San explanation
Love will still survive.
Little words and
Exchange of thoughts
In conversation
Love still survives.
PS: Has been years ..I came out of my fairy tale thoughts about love. But there is something …this feeling. It hates to die. How much ever I try, that li’l fool in me is still alive. Alive in the corner of my heart and growing… Still in conversation.. :)
6 comments:
A very beautifully textured piece of writing! I have always been an ardent admirer of people who can indulge in poesy... I am loving the end line repetition; the poem is very sensory in its appeal,I love the way it conjures up the images as "Sand dunes and desert" and "Tangled mind ..Cripple soul". It is strongly reminiscent of Keats' poetry (I have Ode to a Nightingale in mind)and I am thrilled to rediscover love "red in tooth and claw".
Hi PC :)
Came to your blog after quite a while !! Only to see that your genre of writing hasn't changed much !! Love it this way !!
Wish, you could have written more !!
Cheers,
DeeP
love is the most wanted thing in the world
Very beautiful...loved it...want more like this and in plenty...keep writing...
"Beneath the running scars of life.
Vulnerable loveless sighs.
Out of solitude
Love will still survive...."
interestingly ... you wrote that down on 13th Feb, Sun
Have been looking for faith for quite some time ... not that I found it ... but this point ... those words ... it was helpful ..
Thanks Buddies for those comments... they definitely give-a-push..
And i write :)
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